It's looking better. Nice image choice--the first photo is an attention grabber. First page, line up the photo with the text on the grid. You have shown a nice way to break the paragraphs, but it seems odd that so little of the new paragraph is in the first column. Let's look at what text is on each page tomorrow...maybe there is a better way to break this up. Consider that these are two pages that open up together and you can see both at once. Maybe the alignment of the two photos on pages 1 & 2 is too much alike. What if page 2 photo was higher on the page. The same thing is sort of happening on pages 3 & 4. Think about size contrast of the photos--all four of the photos on these two pages are fairly close in size. On page 4, the text across the whole page doesn't seem as well-designed as easy to read as the rest of the document. Try using 3/4 of the page width for the text or maybe go back to two columns.
It's looking better. Nice image choice--the first photo is an attention grabber. First page, line up the photo with the text on the grid. You have shown a nice way to break the paragraphs, but it seems odd that so little of the new paragraph is in the first column. Let's look at what text is on each page tomorrow...maybe there is a better way to break this up. Consider that these are two pages that open up together and you can see both at once. Maybe the alignment of the two photos on pages 1 & 2 is too much alike. What if page 2 photo was higher on the page. The same thing is sort of happening on pages 3 & 4. Think about size contrast of the photos--all four of the photos on these two pages are fairly close in size. On page 4, the text across the whole page doesn't seem as well-designed as easy to read as the rest of the document. Try using 3/4 of the page width for the text or maybe go back to two columns.
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